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Tuesday, August 6, 2019

Tech

On Thursday 25th July 2019 we started tech again because the fun school holidays ended. When I got to school I was late but made it on time. We walked up on the bus and picked our seats inside. It took about 15-20 minutes long to get there. When we got there we ran up in our lines. My group was in line 11 and we done wood work's.

 When we got inside I got told to take off my jacket so I did and hanged it next to my bag. Then we got told to take a seat and got told that were making key chains. We made the key chains out of wood and I tried to make the instagram logo key chain then I´ll spray paint it at home.

-By Marley

7 comments:

  1. Hello Marley. I really like how you described how your day went, next time it would be nice to hear more information about the actual day in the tech room.

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  2. Hi, Marley I like your descriptive writing for tech sounds really cool that you got to make name tags.

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  3. Hi,Marley i like your descriptive waiting of tech sounds really cool that you got to make name tags

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  4. Hi,Marley i like your descriptive waiting of tech sounds really cool that you got to make name tags

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  5. Bula Marley,Im Manaaki from Rawhiti School.
    My favourite part is when you talked about how was day was going and what you were doing that day at technology. You taught me how long it takes to go to tech and what you had to do in Wood works. I noticed that you used alot of "ands",Maybe next time you could think of using less "ands".How did your Key chain turn out and what was your favourite part doing the Key chain??

    Nga mihi, Manaaki.

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  6. Kia ora Marley. I like the way you have used lots of different words to start your sentences. I wonder what you will use your key ring for? Next time you could try to use some describing words (adjectives) in your writing. Nga mihi, Jude.

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  7. Marley this is great. Can you share more of your learning or even now what you are doing at home? It's been a long time since we've been to tech this year. Ka pai to mahi e hoa.

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